The Purple Flash of Kumo Chapter 40 (New People)
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It's just that I'm here for the story, not the smut, and it feels like the smut keeps interrupting it
MASTERCHEIF1229 .
2024-10-03 02:07:55 +0000 UTCI hear you, but I think I can balance that with writing a normal chapter that advances the plot and then a smut scene there, too.
Drinor
2024-10-03 01:41:19 +0000 UTCGreat story so far! My only issue is that it feels like there are way too many lemons. I feel like there should only be one every 5-10 chapters at most.
MASTERCHEIF1229 .
2024-09-13 22:17:45 +0000 UTCDamn why so many at once? That's alot
Vamble
2024-07-04 14:57:51 +0000 UTCI try to update my stories as fast as possible, but Iโm working on 14 stories. Still, Thank you for your support.
Drinor
2024-07-04 09:59:28 +0000 UTCAnyway I can con you into uploading these faster on fanfic.net ๐ waiting so long to listen to the next chapter of stories is tough ๐
Vamble
2024-07-03 23:22:03 +0000 UTCKakashi is looking out for both Sasuke and Sai. He knows the signs of an ANBU and can tell when someone is or was one. Yugito wonโt like Sakura, especially when she starts running her mouth. Rangikuโs powers will be quite powerful.
Drinor
2024-07-02 19:51:30 +0000 UTCSince Kakashi was an ANBU, I wonder if heโs aware/suspicious of Sai given the mental conditioning that Danzo does to his subordinates in ROOT. As for Sasukeโs behavior: As expected. I get the feeling Yugito might rip Sakura a new one given her disdain for fan girls. Also for Rangiku, Iโm not surprised you might give her something akin to a Zanpakuto/Bankai, but surprised that you tied it to Narutoโs clan.
Anthony Rodriguez
2024-07-02 19:39:50 +0000 UTCIntersting...
Hersh Jobanputra
2024-07-02 17:59:25 +0000 UTC
