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A Polycule of Mars pages 16&17

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A Polycule of Mars pages 16&17 A Polycule of Mars pages 16&17

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Love that they are just casually having a conversation while Sarah is suspended, naked, with a probe inside her.

Sarah Cheong: - Mission goes horribly wrong - Crash lands on Mars - Colleagues unconscious - Realizes aliens are real - Realizes aliens are on Mars, despite no prior evidence - Immediately has sex with the aliens What a gigachadette.

AyuVince

Amazing

Paqs

Thatโ€™s fair, it isnโ€™t the clearest sequence. I ultimately decided that it wasnโ€™t super important that it be clear whose is whose but rather that theyโ€™re all squeezed in greeting. But Kayydotts has it right. Kirsheen is on the left and Jhailee on the right. Jhailee is the one with wider hips. ๐Ÿ˜‰

Garth Graham

Left butt is Kisheen, right butt is Jhailee. You can tell by their clothing. Kisheen has a belt on while Jhailee has a wrap type thing

Kayydotts

I'm having a little trouble tracking who's but is getting squeezed in panel 3 & 5 is it Jhailee & Kisheen or different cheeks of either? On the next page it seems only Jhailee is within arm's reach

PixelThis

... or a little awesome!

Jadelantern

Ha. Could be, but alas itโ€™s a typo. Thank you for finding it!

Garth Graham

LOVE the lighting on Page 16! Especially the first and final panels. Also really great colouration on the spit. Also very much a fan of the cultural naming conventions being put to use. One note, not sure if it's intentional, Page 17 Panel 3 Kirsheen says 'orginal' when I think it should be 'original'. Though, considering the context, an orginal thesis COULD be intended?

BreaktheBar


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